It was to be a wraparound cover to emphasise the theme of the story. This was the first shot which felt a bit cluttered and over-textured:
This simplification didn't seem to solve things:
Wednesday, February 16, 2011
The Park is unresolved
The cover of The Park mini-comic was a bit of a wrestle and what I settled for finally in the previous post still doesn't quite nail it.
It was to be a wraparound cover to emphasise the theme of the story. This was the first shot which felt a bit cluttered and over-textured:
This simplification didn't seem to solve things:
In hindsight I think it's the story itself that prevents the cover coming together.
It was to be a wraparound cover to emphasise the theme of the story. This was the first shot which felt a bit cluttered and over-textured:
This simplification didn't seem to solve things:
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I quite like the first version, but I'll agree it's busy. The simpler one doesn't quite do it for me, but that's just an opinion. ;)
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